Two Haikus: Evening Rain

Photo by Greta Unetich

By Greta Unetich

Two Haikus: Evening Rain 

The rain tonight sends 

Everyone to their houses. 

Our fingertips and 

Faces turned up, we 

Walk, side-by-side, to my car 

Beneath the damp trees. 

Two Haikus: Evening Rain (Alternate) 

The rain sends all souls 

To their houses tonight. Our 

Fingertips turned up, 

We walk to my car, 

Clear off the water and the 

Fog, and start driving.


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